In a forest unknown to mankind, animals have lived together peacefully. This forest, known by the Groups as the Dark Forest, has been their home for over a century. During this time, Leaders have come and gone, and many have died. The Groups have thrived, living as close to peace as they can in such times. Food is scarce, and rivalries are growing.
The Groups started as four; the Coven, the Aerie, the Clan, and the Pack. However, years ago, the Pack fought, splitting in two. The Packs are currently known as Blizzard Pack, and the other currently known as Mist Pack.
Times are growing hard, on every Group. Humans have begun noticing the unprotected area, and hunters from everywhere have started wrecking havoc upon the Groups' way of life. So many catastrophes threaten the animals' lives; will you be one of the survivors?
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*LEADER* Thyme « Thread Started on Oct 17, 2009, 7:45pm »
Name: Thyme
Age: Two years (Fox years)
Gender: Male
Species: Fox
Description: Thyme has a rough feeling pelt, that is colored black. He also has dark brown eyes, that normally hold a calm look. At the end of his tail, you can see a creamy-white color, with a couple black pieces of fur at the very tip. Thyme enjoys walking through tall grass, and loves sunny weather, despite how hothe gets from having such a dark-colored pelt. You can also sometimes see Thyme lying between some large rocks, or hiding underneath the shadeof a large tree.
Personality: Thyme is usually very calm, and quiet, he can be fierce and sometimes cruel when angered, but he never deals out horrible punishments. Deep down he is loving, and caring and sometimes will take a little slip, saying something like "Good job" or "Congragulations". Sometimes Thyme is nice and in a good mood, but most of the time he doesn'tshow much emotion at all.
History: (There isn't really anything interesting >.<) Thyme was born below a berry bush, his mother and father abandoned him before he was old enough to go on his own. He learned onhis own, by expirementing, butdue to being alone for so lone, he doesn't show emotions very well.
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Re: *LEADER* Thyme « Reply #1 on Oct 17, 2009, 8:13pm »
There are a few things wrong with the bio...
The Coven Leader position isn't open (hence Fern's banner in the Leaders' sidebox) His description is only three sentences- "Thyme enjoys walking through tall grass, and loves sunny weather, despite how hothe gets from having such a dark-colored pelt. You can also sometimes see Thyme lying between some large rocks, or hiding underneath the shadeof a large tree." doesn't have anything to do with what he looks like. Personality is only three sentences as well- you have a few run-ons that you can separate though.
So fix those, and switch his position, and he'll be accepted.